These are just words, the truth is how you make me feel.
Tuesday, November 13, 2012
So this is how it is
we talk like this
haltingly, hauntingly
echoing ideas
halfheartedly
trying
not to complete
the thought i didn't have
and wont
because it is too beautiful
it will blow your mind
into littler pieces
than this.
Your poetry is so lovely, so honest, so pure, sweetheart... it speaks to me, goes straight to my heart, and that's something I haven't felt in quite a while.
Thank you for making my rainy Monday beautiful. Lu.
the beat of my heart whispers hope unknowing everything knowingly still at the end of description My heart beats whispers of hope with a broad centered uncertainty
Your poetry is so lovely, so honest, so pure, sweetheart... it speaks to me, goes straight to my heart, and that's something I haven't felt in quite a while.
ReplyDeleteThank you for making my rainy Monday beautiful.
Lu.
the beat of my heart whispers
ReplyDeletehope unknowing everything
knowingly
still at the end
of description
My heart beats whispers of hope
with a broad centered uncertainty
feeling it without saying
but here
very well said!
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